This is my narrative SUNK!!
Sunk!
It was 3 AM 2005 Friday the 13 in the pacific ocean, I was on a ship called the New Titanic. I could not sleep at all, the bar was open so I was going to get a beer. As I was walking, ever now and again I could hear children laughing could they be in my mind? Or could they be my children? I knew those laugh’s anywhere when I got to the bar I was amazed to see my children Jason and Matilda with my Wife Bree.
As soon as we all got a drink we heard a loud BANG
“What is going on!” Asked Matilda.
I look below and see water rising,
“The boat has hit something!”I said.
I could tell the kids were sacred so was I, In a bit people were running everywhere we went to the lifeboats but I then realized the kids weren't with us.
We looked all over the deck calling them, we thought that someone had taken them to a lifeboat until we heard a loud scream “HELP”. It had to be them I told Bree to stay and keep a lifeboat while I go and get the kids I look at all the places that weren't flooded. I look at the bar it was half Flooded and then I saw them. They got caught on a pole, I got them off and we rushed to the top. Bree was still there with a boat, Now the ship was really flooded and we managed to make it just in time.
I asked the kids how they got stuck on that pole,
“A crazy guy grabbed us and put us there” Jason said,
“He also said Spare us lord of 3AM” Matilda added.